Sunday, March 17, 2013

My Love For You - 2nd draft

Tormenting it is
To think about you
I detest you
Yet I yearn for you



This clash of wits
Is my last chance
To crush you
To maim you
But my love for you
Will tear me apart



6 comments:

seema said...

u write veryy gracefully ..:) n its olways lovelyy 2 read ur stuff ..keep up d gud wrk darlingg!! <3

sanam! said...

Awww thank you :)

sriti said...

brilliant! i love such pieces short crisp and the impact of an earthquake.. :D :D

sanam! said...

Hahaha..I am glad you liked it, Thanks a tonne :)

sriti said...

You know I remember what Ruchi ma'am once said, "poetry has to be like a terror attack, and the poet like a terrorist, the work has to be precise, well timed and must leave an Impact."

your piece reminded me of the statement. :) :)

sanam! said...

oh my.. thanks a lot for that compliment... it means a lot because that's exactly the impression i wanted to create :D